Eu gostei mt dese jogo eu quero um final que agente acaba engravidando do daniel e mesmo gravida ele ainda abusa da gente e depois vai ter o parto do bebê que faz o parto em casa ja que teve complicações (por que sera) e ele come a placenta e e depois de algumas horas ele abusa da gente denvo e diz "mesmo que vc acabou de dar a luz eu vou continuar a ter encher das minhas sementes pq como as pessoas falam um filho é mt pouco pra quem quer uma familia grande"
Really good prototype! The prose is tight, the MC feels more believable and real in their reactions than most horror game protagonists. The atmosphere was suffocating and I felt honestly nauseous at parts - I feel like this was the intent, so well done! Loved the art style as well: the sketchy style really added to the raw and urgent energy of the scenes.
Some notes: The grammar is usually really good, but I noticed that whenever a sentence in the dialogue trailed off, it would have two periods instead of three (eg, "please don't..") Maybe a stylistic choice? But definitely something I noticed.
I also wasn't able to use a capital letter to start my name. The text box just wouldn't accept it, nothing would appear if I tried to type using shift or caps lock. Probably a bug?
(SPOILERS FROM HERE ON OUT) There was an issue where if I chose to fight Daniel and then became more obedient after he removed MC's limbs, the game would act as if I'd been "docile" the whole time, notably mentioning the effects of painkillers that I hadn't received.
I really liked that the protagonist fought back HARD. When you get the "bite him" option, I was not expecting to graphically rip a chunk of his mouth away! I think that's good and realistic for the situation - you wouldn't just lightly nip when you're fighting for your life.
Small art critique: in the scene with him in the truck, his hand position looks really uncomfortable/unnatural. I know hands are really hard, I'm certainly not the best at drawing them in complicated poses either. Just thought I'd mention it as something to think about changing in the final product.
Ultimately, this was really tense and well-written horror, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
A few hints at the game's peculiarities (like spoilers, I'd better write it and Jesus will forgive me). I poked around in the game, and it's really interesting! I wouldn't say that it shocked me very much, but there's something to think about. Daniel himself has a memorable image, plus his figure is easy to explain by the conventions of the game. In short, back and forth. But the most important thing, come on, is that any choice you make doesn't change anything. If you try this on other similar projects that I've played, then in order to survive, you have to feel when you should take a risk and when to pretend to be submissive. Here, no matter how you twist and turn, Daniel will remain the same. And in this... damn... such a social subtext! The first thing is that if a person really wants something, he will do everything for it (this applies to any thing, yo, from maniacs to relationships). For example, if I want Dr Pepper, I will go to the store. If the store doesn’t have Dr Pepper, I will go to another one, and another, and another. If the store doesn’t have it, I will order delivery. If there is no delivery, I will wait until another day and go to the store again. In the game, as in life, everything is the same, it’s just that the Dr Pepper here is VERY different, ahaha. The second thing is that you cannot be responsible for the desires and actions of other people. Each of us has our own duties, our own rights and our own responsibility. Therefore, blaming the victim is immoral bullshit: if you go right, Daniel will come, if you go left, Daniel will come, if you fucking stand still, he will come. And the third thing is that no matter how you try to behave (whether you will always be perfect, submissive or wild, intriguing) you will not be able to change another person. Are you lying or telling the truth? YOU GO TO THE DEVIL BOTH TIME, DUDE. Each of these aspects flows into each other, but these are really the thoughts that came to me during the playthrough. Very cool! And the final game should be a teeth-pulling experience. thanks!
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I want to play it soo bad in iphone :((
This game is so goooood!!! I love Daniel now
its so good but in a terrifying way
I. WANT. HIM. PREGNANT.
Pleaseee release a new chapter or something
when he died, so did me. 😔
jokes aside, i gotta ask, what kind of brushes were used for the illustrations?
Es la primera vez que probé un juego así...
Muchas gracias por la increíble experiencia ^^ (10/10)
This is horrificly bad in a good way, like... gahdamn
will it ever be available for phones and iPads to play the game ?
when will it be available for iPads to play the game
Eu gostei mt dese jogo eu quero um final que agente acaba engravidando do daniel e mesmo gravida ele ainda abusa da gente e depois vai ter o parto do bebê que faz o parto em casa ja que teve complicações (por que sera) e ele come a placenta e e depois de algumas horas ele abusa da gente denvo e diz "mesmo que vc acabou de dar a luz eu vou continuar a ter encher das minhas sementes pq como as pessoas falam um filho é mt pouco pra quem quer uma familia grande"
When will it be available on iOS? I’ve been trying to play it on my iPad but it isn’t available, I would gladly buy it!
i click download now but the downloads arnt available as links sm1 help i beg :[
I love this game so much
I had to the opportunity to draw this was to good to pass it down
I am not ok
😟
when w1wd final release 😭😭😭
i just replayed for the 1000000th time and now im desperately biting and humping my screen
I LOVE THE GAME!! CAN'T WAIT TO PLAY THE FINALL! I hope at least the final game have happy ending!
Eh o segundo vai lança quando?
I'm going to install this game again in case the new censorship measures reach it
Need that.
Really good prototype! The prose is tight, the MC feels more believable and real in their reactions than most horror game protagonists. The atmosphere was suffocating and I felt honestly nauseous at parts - I feel like this was the intent, so well done! Loved the art style as well: the sketchy style really added to the raw and urgent energy of the scenes.
Some notes:
The grammar is usually really good, but I noticed that whenever a sentence in the dialogue trailed off, it would have two periods instead of three (eg, "please don't..") Maybe a stylistic choice? But definitely something I noticed.
I also wasn't able to use a capital letter to start my name. The text box just wouldn't accept it, nothing would appear if I tried to type using shift or caps lock. Probably a bug?
(SPOILERS FROM HERE ON OUT)
There was an issue where if I chose to fight Daniel and then became more obedient after he removed MC's limbs, the game would act as if I'd been "docile" the whole time, notably mentioning the effects of painkillers that I hadn't received.
I really liked that the protagonist fought back HARD. When you get the "bite him" option, I was not expecting to graphically rip a chunk of his mouth away! I think that's good and realistic for the situation - you wouldn't just lightly nip when you're fighting for your life.
Small art critique: in the scene with him in the truck, his hand position looks really uncomfortable/unnatural. I know hands are really hard, I'm certainly not the best at drawing them in complicated poses either. Just thought I'd mention it as something to think about changing in the final product.
Ultimately, this was really tense and well-written horror, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Nobody asked
somebody's mad
How are you POSSIBLY upset with someone giving gentle criticism to try to make the game better? That's crazy
A few hints at the game's peculiarities (like spoilers, I'd better write it and Jesus will forgive me). I poked around in the game, and it's really interesting! I wouldn't say that it shocked me very much, but there's something to think about. Daniel himself has a memorable image, plus his figure is easy to explain by the conventions of the game. In short, back and forth. But the most important thing, come on, is that any choice you make doesn't change anything. If you try this on other similar projects that I've played, then in order to survive, you have to feel when you should take a risk and when to pretend to be submissive. Here, no matter how you twist and turn, Daniel will remain the same. And in this... damn... such a social subtext! The first thing is that if a person really wants something, he will do everything for it (this applies to any thing, yo, from maniacs to relationships). For example, if I want Dr Pepper, I will go to the store. If the store doesn’t have Dr Pepper, I will go to another one, and another, and another. If the store doesn’t have it, I will order delivery. If there is no delivery, I will wait until another day and go to the store again. In the game, as in life, everything is the same, it’s just that the Dr Pepper here is VERY different, ahaha. The second thing is that you cannot be responsible for the desires and actions of other people. Each of us has our own duties, our own rights and our own responsibility. Therefore, blaming the victim is immoral bullshit: if you go right, Daniel will come, if you go left, Daniel will come, if you fucking stand still, he will come. And the third thing is that no matter how you try to behave (whether you will always be perfect, submissive or wild, intriguing) you will not be able to change another person. Are you lying or telling the truth? YOU GO TO THE DEVIL BOTH TIME, DUDE. Each of these aspects flows into each other, but these are really the thoughts that came to me during the playthrough. Very cool! And the final game should be a teeth-pulling experience. thanks!
Does anyone know when the final game gets released?
Reminds me of the song Helena by Misfits
Daniel is so fine oh my god
PLEAAASE WAYEN I NEEEED DANIIL I NEED HIM I NEED THE FINALE
he wil be there.. pathetic and needy.. muhehehehe
this made me feel sick, thanks
Sin palabras
are you over the age of 18 bro.. please proofread